I haven't finished reading this book, so I don't dare to comment on it, but I just talk about how I feel after reading the first few chapters.

Okay, let's get back to business, first of all, the beginning of the author, yes, really good, directly fascinating, people first have an urge to read it first, no matter what book you write, the beginning is very important, obviously the author is very accurate.

Secondly, the martial arts flavor of this book is extremely strong, and the words of the boss in the first chapter are very ancient dragon, simple and domineering. This is still better than what Cangqi wrote.

Then there are the characters, the characters of the general novel are written vividly, and holding the novel is at least half the success, and the author continues to be good.

The plot, how does a novel develop, can it be attractive, continue to read, the storyline is very important, if it is not strange, no reader is willing to read it, especially the first few chapters must be written, Cangqi read the first few chapters, and it still feels good, at least I can associate the picture in the book, and I also want to see what will happen below. So the author did this. This is actually very difficult, because the first few chapters of my book are too bland, so it gives people the feeling that they don't want to continue reading.

Writing, then I don't need to say anything, I can have the confidence to type so many words on the keyboard, I have already proved that I can write, maybe the first time I write there will be unfamiliar places, but sprinkling so many words, it is enough to prove that the writing is enough.

I believe the author has read a lot of martial arts novels, if this book is in the martial arts category, it is also a good martial arts, this is actually the foundation, and if you read more, you will write it. Read poems a hundred times, and if you can't write poems, you can chant them. Actually, that's the truth.

As for the shortcomings, Cangqi only read the first few chapters, and Cangqi can't find anything wrong with the plot and character dialogue, but it would be better if some words were considered in the future.

Long review?

No?

What is that?

It's just a little bit of my own feeling.

Haha, I see.

A long river turns the rivers and lakes into two incompatible worlds, north and south, doesn't it?

But isn't it true that you have me, and I have you?

Ha ha. Born in troubled times, no one can escape the grievances of the rivers and lakes.