Recently, 101 watched "Smiling Proud Jianghu" again, and I have been wondering how Lao Jin portrayed a thing vividly. Pen, fun, and www.biquge.info

We usually know that there are six senses, namely: hearing, seeing, touching, tasting, smelling, and thinking, which describe the perception of a thing through the five senses of the person, plus mental activities.

But after careful consideration, 101 found that this is not enough, because reading a book and associating with the six senses is actually only the imagination triggered by the description of words, not the people and things in the world of the story.

More often than not, the author needs to construct an environment and use the surrounding references to illustrate what happened.

The reference here can be the surrounding people, objects, atmosphere, or even the author's own lyrical brushwork.

Example:

That day, the doorman's face was full of anger, as if he was about to explode with great anger in his heart, and his left hand slapped heavily on the arm of the Taishi chair, and shouted: "What about Linghu Chong?" His voice was extremely loud, and it was like a thunderbolt in mid-air. Everyone in the hall heard his shout from afar, and they were all moved. The girl Ling Shan exclaimed: "Third Senior Brother, they are looking for Senior Brother again." Liang Fa nodded, did not speak, and after a while, said in a low voice: "Everyone decides! Lin Ping thought to himself: "They are looking for Linghu Chong again." This old man Linghu has really a lot of trouble. ”

Lauderno's ears were buzzing by the loud shout of anger and condensation from the Heavenly Gate Daoist, and he knelt on the ground for a moment before standing up,

Comments:

Look at how the power of this drink is written

Write the character's expression first: That day, the doorman's face was full of anger, as if he was about to explode with great anger in his heart, and his left hand slapped heavily on the arm of the Taishi chair.

It feels like it's very aggressive, so it feels like it's screaming loudly

shouted: "What about Linghu Chong?" --- the language content is very short, and it can be imagined that it is full of momentum, not long sentences

His words were so loud that they were like a thunderbolt in mid-air. --- describe it and give some intuitive imagination

Everyone in the hall heard his shout from afar, and they were all moved. The girl Ling Shan exclaimed: "Third Senior Brother, they are looking for Senior Brother again." Liang Fa nodded, did not speak, and after a while, said in a low voice: "Everyone decides! Lin Ping thought to himself: "They are looking for Linghu Chong again." This old man Linghu has really a lot of trouble. ”

-- These are all references

used a crowd that was shocked, the reaction of the girl Yue Lingshan, Liang Fa's reaction, and Lin Pingzhi's reaction as a foil

Lauderno's ears were buzzing by the loud shout of anger and condensation from the Heavenly Gate Daoist, and he knelt on the ground for a moment before standing up,

Finally, it came back to Lauderno

The power of this drink, the reader can finally imagine how abrupt and scary it must be

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Let's remove the references and take a look at the effect:

That day, the doorman's face was full of anger, as if he was about to explode with great anger in his heart, and his left hand slapped heavily on the arm of the Taishi chair, and shouted: "What about Linghu Chong?" His voice was extremely loud, and it was like a thunderbolt in mid-air.

Lauderno's ears were buzzing by the loud shout of anger and condensation from the Heavenly Gate Daoist, and he knelt on the ground for a moment before standing up,

The taste is a lot worse, isn't it? It seems that the world inside the door is isolated from the world outside the door, which seems a little fake.

Finally, to sum up, the reason why the great god writes a story world very realistically is that he puts the story in a world similar to the real world, and the occurrence of any thing is not independent and separated from other things. In particular, simulating a world through words, in addition to using the six senses to describe it, it is also indispensable to always consider the addition of references.