Just 101 watched the beginning of "Smiling Proud Jianghu" and learned a kind of opening penmanship, and 101 summarized it as "implying that there is a story here". Pen, fun, and www.biquge.info

Start with the previous paragraph:

The wind smokes the willows, the fragrance of flowers is intoxicating, it is the spring season in the south. On the West Gate Street of Fuzhou Mansion in Fujian Province, the bluestone slab road stretches straight out and leads straight to the West Gate. Before a magnificent mansion is built, a flagpole of two feet high is erected in the two stone altars on the left and right, and the green flag flutters on the top of the pole. The yellow silk thread on the right flag is embroidered with a male lion with teeth and claws, and a majestic demeanor, and the flag is waving in the wind, making the male lion more vigorous. On the top of the lion's head, a pair of bats embroidered with black silk thread spread their wings and fly. The left flag is embroidered with four black characters of "Fuwei Dart Bureau", with silver hooks and iron strokes, and the strength is extraordinary. The vermilion lacquer door of the mansion, the copper nails the size of a teacup on the door are shining, and the plaque on the top of the door reads "Fuwei Dart Bureau" four large gold lacquer characters, and the horizontal book below is "General Number" two small characters. At the entrance, there are two rows of benches, and there are eight men who have finished their strong suits, all of whom have straight waists, showing a heroic spirit.

Comments:

The words used in this paragraph are all majestic impressions, such as: the straight bluestone road, the construction of a magnificent mansion, the flagpole two feet high, the lion with teeth and claws, the mighty demeanor, the words drawn by silver hooks and iron, the vermilion lacquer gate, the copper nails the size of a teacup, the big characters of gold lacquer, and eight men in strong suits.

Some people say that the beginning should not describe the scenery in too many details, but Jin Yong used a very delicate pen and ink to write these here, the purpose is to hint to the reader: "There is a story about to happen here......

How did this effect come about? It comes from the author's use of a series of majestic descriptions of the scenery, giving people a hint that the atmosphere here is very solemn and solemn, and the people and things here are also extraordinary.

The same technique was used in "The Stars Change":

It was the middle of winter, and after the heavy snowfall, the entire Yanjing City was covered with a layer of silver. Yanjing City is huge, it can accommodate millions of people, and the mansion of Qin De, the 'King of Zhendong' who controls the three counties of the Eastern Regions, is in this Yanjing City.

The Zhendong Wang's Mansion covers an extremely wide area, the main gate is greatly open day and night, and the main entrance of the mansion is extremely wide, enough for six or seven people to enter in parallel.

On both sides of the gate stood two brave men with a height of about two meters and an upper body, these two big men were like rock carvings, their indifferent eyes scanned the passing crowd, and the huge blood-red war knife was hanging on the broad tiger's back. The blood-red sword looked like it was one and a half meters long.

In the depths of winter, the snow was all over the ground, the temperature was frighteningly low, and the river was already frozen, but the two big men were wearing their upper bodies.

However, this is not the most terrifying, what is even more terrifying is that there is a fierce tiger next to these two big men.

The tiger's whole body is as red as a flame, and its body length is about two meters, and the tail like an iron whip suddenly sweeps away the air for a while, and the tiger's eyes emit a cold glow, this tiger is the so-called 'fierce tiger'.

Suddenly, two other big men came out of the mansion of the king of Zhendong, these two big men also wore their upper bodies, and they were pulling a fierce tiger, they were here to change shifts.

Outside the mansion, the wealthy nobles of Yanjing City or the commoners and nomads all consciously walked away around the mansion of King Zhendong.

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In the end, 101 imitated this kind of brushwork, and also wrote an urban beginning, let's comment on it:

In the golden autumn of October, the sun is shining.

There is a straight and wide road at the main entrance of the Ben Thanh Model College, and a luxury version of the Land Rover is parked on the side of the road.

The color of the black and shiny, the elegant model, the brand new license plate before and after the car shows the number of KE-00001, if people who are familiar with the number plate of the military vehicle see it, they will be shocked, because this is the No. 1 car of the Air Force of the Shenyang Military Region.

Model Academy, luxury Land Rover, No. 1 military vehicle, these elements should give the reader enough hints, a sense of anticipation arises spontaneously, as for what to expect, hehe...... You don't need to say more about 101, right?