Yun Mu almost fell, and said helplessly: "I just heard you tell the story structure, I thought it was a struggle between the poor peasant class and the landlord class, and on the whole it was very harmonious and in line with the policy of our party-state. But this sentence came out of you, it's so discordant. ”

Yuan Ze said disapprerovingly: "The real story is framed in the back, just like all the protagonists, the protagonist was rescued in a mass grave." And like in all books, he was saved by a beautiful woman. Unlike regular novels, this beautiful woman is a female devil. ”

Yun Mu: "What's the difference, the female devil is about to be written badly." ”

Yuan Ze: "Of course it's different, you listen to me." The female devil takes the protagonist back to the mountain gate and gives him a cheatbook. At the beginning, the protagonist practiced hard and was grateful to the female devil. It wasn't until a year later that the female demon suddenly broke into the protagonist's retreat, and she was so crazy that she fought with the protagonist in bed for 800 rounds that night. ”

Yun Mu was not happy: "So far, I haven't felt anything new. ”

Yuan Ze: "The novelty is coming soon, the protagonist is a mountain baby, and he is more tendonous." He felt that the beautiful master was kind to him, and the master could take his life, let alone his body. At the same time, he also has a certain feeling, feeling that he can sleep with this kind of beauty, and it is worth dying. For several nights in a row, the protagonist and the female devil turned over the clouds, and the protagonist at this time gradually became addicted and couldn't extricate himself. Every time the protagonist sees the female devil, it's like Kong Yiji seeing Xianglin's sister-in-law: I want to sleep with you! ”

Yun Mu interrupted: "That's Ah Q and Xianglin's sister-in-law, right?" ”

"Anyway, that's it." Yuan Ze hated Yun Mu for ruining the atmosphere, and continued: "Seven days later, the protagonist found that he had lost all his skills, and his cultivation was all made up by the female devil. The angry protagonist plans to ask the master for a reason, but in the end he only sees a sneer on the corner of the master's mouth......"

That day, he was taken to a huge palace underneath, where thousands of men were imprisoned who had been movered like the main character. Through a conversation with a fellow inmate, the protagonist realizes that the young and beautiful master in his mind is actually a centuries-old witch. It turned out that the master who was grateful to Dade was actually a notorious female demon in the cultivation realm...... The sect where the protagonist is located is called the Heavenly Desire Sect.,The core of this sect is all female disciples.,As for the male disciples, they are the objects of supplementation.。 At that moment, the protagonist's outlook on life and worldview briefly collapsed......"

Yun Mu: "Isn't your overall atmosphere too depressing?" According to your routine, at least ten chapters of these plots will be written, and who will buy it? According to my research, most of the novels that can be popular now are masochistic in the first chapter, adventures in the second chapter, practice in the third chapter, and kill in the fourth chapter, your pace is too slow. ”

Yuan Ze said disdainfully: "Fuck it, Lao Tzu doesn't expect this book to be popular, the main thing is to write the feeling in my heart." Don't interrupt and listen to me. The male disciples in the dungeon only do one thing a day, practice, and when they practice to a certain extent, they will be cleaned up, and they will never have a chance to resist. ”

Yun Mu: "This is similar to raising pigs, kill them when you are fattened?" ”

Yuan Ze: "That's right, such an experience will make the protagonist's mentality change dramatically, and he also needs to precipitate." ”

Yun Mu: "Ask a question with a technical surname, is there anyone who refuses to practice?" ”

Yuan Ze: "If you don't practice, you will die, there is progress every day, just like the game, how many experience points you have to get every day to pass the level." ”

Yun Mu: "Are there any pure masters who resist desperately?" It's better to live like this than to die! ”

Yuan Ze: "Ants are still greedy for life, who wants to die if they can live?" My question expresses the theme that in the cultivation realm, people cultivate for the sake of immortality, and are willing to do anything to live, even if they know very well that it is meaningless to live like this. It is precisely at this time that the protagonist should reflect, after all, he is the protagonist and he cannot accept that he lives like a pig. ”

Yun Mu: "What did he reflect on?" ”

Yuan Ze: "This kind of reflection must be layered, it can't be achieved overnight, you can't let a rookie who has just entered the cultivation realm understand the true meaning of the Heavenly Dao overnight, he has to explore step by step." ”

"I already feel the breath of hitting the street, I can't be awesome all at once, who wants to see it?" Yun Mu said, seeing Yuan Ze's unhappy expression, he changed his words: "Having said that, the kind of awesome can only pass the time with fast food, it really depends on a reasonable growth experience, I choose to read you." ”

Yuan Ze: "Let's go on to talk about the layering of thoughts, and initially the protagonist feels such a thought, which is similar to our modern thinking: life is like force, if you can't resist, then enjoy...... So he practiced hard, desperately fought for performance, and later became one of the top ten male disciples. What are the top ten male disciples, it is similar to the Han Annihilation who collaborated with the enemy and betrayed the country, they had to sneak around the female disciples, and at the same time manage those disobedient male disciples. ”

Yun Mu said weakly: "Wouldn't this be too shameless, it will cause public outrage." ”

Yuan Ze said proudly: "There are even more shameless, the protagonist's mouth is getting sweeter and sweeter, and his kung fu is getting better and better, focusing on pleasing the five female disciples." As for these five female disciples, they have to be written in a big book, and the people in the rivers and lakes call Dongjiao, Ximei, Nanjiao, Beidang, and Zhongchrysanthemum! All in all, these are the five golden flowers of the Heavenly Desire Palace, and the protagonist takes the initiative to find the five golden flowers to make up for him every time he exercises and upgrades, and gradually wins the trust of the five golden flowers......"

Yun Mu: "It's too cheap, you won't substitute yourself as the protagonist, I wish you would be pushed back by the five golden flowers, right?" ”

Yuan Ze: "You were wrong, no one expected that the protagonist had an adventure during this period." It's a magic weapon with an effect similar to that of the Phoenix Nirvana.,Every time it's replenished.,The next day the protagonist will recover his power.,And the power is more refined.。 Of course, no one else found out about the secret. ”

Yun Mu: "So what the protagonist has to do every day is to strip naked and lie down, and shout to the five golden flowers: Come on, don't pity me? ”

Yuan Ze: "You can say this in the early stage, but it was different later. In fact, the top ten male disciples have privileges, and in order to facilitate the management of other male disciples, they will not be cleaned up every time, and they will only be collected once every three months. During this period, the protagonist also experienced a lot of things, until one day, his cultivation was already on par with the five golden flowers. At this time, he will reflect again, what is the meaning of his stay in the Heavenly Desire Palace, when will such a son be a head? ”

As he spoke, Yuan Ze's tone changed: "On this day, the senior brother who has been competing with the protagonist and being jealous did something. This day is an annual ceremony, and the ten male disciples will be picked up by the female devil at the same time. At that moment, the senior brother suddenly sacrificed a mysterious magic weapon and accidentally injured the female devil. At the same time, the elder brother also dies, and at that moment, the protagonist sees something from the corpse of the elder brother: dignity ......"

Yun Mu was stunned: "Dignity? ”

Yuan Ze: "Yes, dignity. A dignified life that is respectable even when it falls. ”

Yun Mu: "It's so profound, is this a fragrant novel?" ”

Yuan Ze: "What kind of novel it is, it depends on what kind of eyes you use to look at it. ”

Yun Mu: "Let me ask, what is the tone of this book?" Do you want to use a witty approach to express a serious question, or a serious approach to a witty question? ”

Yuan Ze: "Can I use the technique of Yindang to express the question of purity?" ”

Yun Mu: "Where is the purity?" ”

Yuan Ze: "The first time he was wheeled by the five golden flowers, the protagonist was very nervous, his worried expression, trembling body, and ten fingers holding the sheet deeply betrayed his heart...... When he walked out of the room that night, the protagonist looked at the bright moon in the sky, and two lines of hot tears rolled down, flashing a shadow in his tears, which he would never forget...... Emerald flowers at the east end of the village. ”

Yun Mu listened with relish: "This is all a flashback, you go on, what happened after the senior brother died?" ”

Yuan Ze said excitedly: "Speaking of this, it's lively, at the moment of the tragic death of the senior brother, five of the top ten disciples launched an attack on the female devil. Because the female demon was injured by the senior brother, it was difficult to distinguish the victory from the five male disciples for a while. At this time, the protagonist understands that everyone is unwilling to be enslaved, and it turns out that many oppressed people have the impulse to resist hidden in their hearts. ”

Yun Mu: "I understand, the top ten male disciples are actually not Han Jian, but revolutionary soldiers disguised as Han Jian?" ”

Yuan Ze nodded: "Sort of." ”

Yun Mu: "Then what did the protagonist do at this time, is he like Mel in "Braveheart"? Gibson, like him, jumped out and shouted: freedom!? ”

Yuan Ze: "No. ”

Yun Mu: "The protagonist didn't do it? ”

Yuan Ze: "It's done." ”

Yun Mu: "What do you mean?" ”

Yuan Ze: "He did it to the five senior brothers. ”

Yun Mu was surprised: "Why? ”

Yuan Ze: "At this time, the protagonist's cultivation is stronger than the five senior brothers, and he has already sensed that the five golden flowers are coming quickly. At that moment, his reaction was to do something to the senior brothers. At that moment, no one can understand the pain in the protagonist's heart, which can be understood in modern terms: if you want a revolution, you must have sacrifice. ”

Yun Mu: "Are you alluding to some historical issues?" ”

Yuan Ze: "As I said, it depends on what kind of eyes you use. ”

Yun Mu: "Okay, let's move on to the rest of the story. ”

Yuan Ze: "On that day, the protagonist became the only one among the top ten male disciples to survive. His status changed, and he became the chief male disciple, almost on an equal footing with the Five Golden Flowers. In the eyes of female disciples, this is a man who can please people and has more skills than Weiyangsheng. In the eyes of the male disciples, this is a ruthless and unrighteous living Yama who kills people without blinking. At this time, the protagonist has realized that he no longer needs to care about the eyes of others, and he has determined the path he wants to take in the future. ”

Yun Mu: "Just like the protagonist in a certain book, the protagonist who is incarnated as a demon stands in the hunting wind, and a voice echoes in his heart: How many people do you have to kill to attain the Great Dao?" ”

Yuan Ze: "It's almost, but if there is such a similar plot, my protagonist should stand in the hunting wind and reflect in his heart: How many people do you have to say in order to achieve positive results?" ”

Yun Mu was stunned for a moment, he suddenly remembered himself, who had cultivated the combination of light and darkness.

Yuan Ze: "Later, the protagonist who won the trust of the female devil made a name for himself in the cultivation world. A few years later, the female demon took him to a rather awesome place to participate in the Uncovered Conference. ”

Yun Mu was stunned again: "Uncovered Assembly? ”

Yuan Ze: "That's right, the uncovered conference held by the Demon Dao, the demons danced wildly, and all kinds of demons and monsters competed with each other in double cultivation kung fu, this can be regarded as the top academic seminar in the double cultivation world." ”

Yun Mu: "What is the result of the discussion?" ”

Yuan Ze: "The result was not discussed, the protagonist became powerful, and under the help of countless female devils, his cultivation was promoted to a peak." At the same time, I realized a self-created mental method: anti-miraculous! ”

Yun Mu's feet softened: "Anti-miraculous? ”

Yuan Ze: "Well, the women who have said him have been retorted by him." This is not the end, the female devil who made up for him was all made up by him in turn. The protagonist's cultivation soared at a crazy speed, overturning three hundred witches and five hundred witches on the spot, creating an eternal miracle. ”

Yun Mu: "Then isn't he invincible in the world?" ”

Yuan Ze: "Almost." ”

"Sure enough, it's a future, it's very pertinent." Yun Mu was quite touched and asked, "What happened later?" ”

Yuan Ze: "Later, the protagonist liberated countless male disciples trapped in the Heavenly Desire Palace and became a hero in the minds of men. Just when everyone thought he was going to kill his female demon master, the protagonist had a new kind of ideological awareness, and I was going to give him a very mysterious connotation. ”

Yun Mu: "What connotation?" ”

Yuan Ze: "With a little hand in the protagonist, the female devil was influenced by him and became extremely holy." ”

Yun Mu: "Your sister, this is the connotation?" ”

Yuan Ze: "Of course you can't do this, you have to have a sense of layering, and you have to express it through narration." When the protagonist pointed out, there was a loud bang in the sky, countless golden lights flashed, followed by a very solemn voice in mid-air: In hellfire, if you have come to cross the Shura, for the sake of perseverance to subdue the evil calamity, you will rebuke the death of a hundred ghosts, and the Husera tree will be self-......"

Yun Mu: "Yes, yes, this sounds a bit awesome." ”

Yuan Ze: "This is not the end, the protagonist suddenly has a big enlightenment, the treasure is solemn, and he mutters to himself: One thought kills life as a demon, and one thought looks back and becomes a Buddha......"

Yun Mu was stunned: "Do you want to be so high-end?" ”

Yuan Ze: "It's necessary, it's time to be awesome after so long." ”

Yun Mu: "Okay, then the protagonist became a Buddha later?" ”

Yuan Ze: "Yes, and it is to become the second generation of happy Buddha, at the finale, all believers knelt on the ground, folded their hands, and said: Nan Wuyindang Happy Buddha ......"

Yun Mu was surprised: "Yo, I've even thought about the finale, so I didn't do my homework?" ”

Yuan Ze: "What do you think?" ”

Yun Mu: "Yes, it's very interesting. ”

Yuan Ze raised his eyebrows: "Really? ”

Yun Mu: "However, it is also very dangerous. At the same time, I feel that you will definitely be harmonized. ”

Yuan Ze: "Won't it?" ”

Yun Mu: "This kind of theme, the selling point is Yindang, the writing is shallow and not energetic, and the deep writing is harmonious, how do you choose?" ”

Yuan Ze: "What about playing side balls?" ”

Yun Mu: "It's not so easy, every time you write a chapter, you have some scruples, you are timid, you are timid, it is equivalent to abandoning half of your martial arts first, and you are no longer the original you at this time." What is written in this way may not be good-looking, and you should be very miserable in the process, and you will probably be a eunuch halfway through the writing. ”

Yuan Ze smiled: "It's like it's true, have you ever written about this kind of theme?" ”

Yun Mu stopped talking, with his current surname Gao Ling, some problems were predictable

(To be continued)