100, Girlfriend Paradise (9)

Time is never enough for lovers.

Qingfeng held Jiang Wan's hand and asked her kindly, "I have read all the poems you posted on the website recently, every sentence is hot and full of feelings, the life on the university campus is really a fertile land for you, your hard work is achieving a bumper harvest in creation, and I am really happy for you from the bottom of my heart." ”

Jiang Wan shook the big hands vigorously, and said sweetly, "The beautiful university campus, the purple and red autumn colors, coupled with the sweet love, is a colorful world for me, which is too precious as a poet, do you say that you can not make progress in creation?" It's hard to talk about a big harvest, but the passion and inspiration are always there. ”

Qingfeng heard her say this, her heart was very happy, the interaction between the two people, sweet love, has also become a kind of motivation and source of her creation, the experience of first love, let her more passionate, "But I recently read your poems, and it seems to be a little different from before, your original poems are that kind of purity, and you are now more emotional, more passionate poems, what you see is no longer that kind of calm, but a kind of romance, a kind of liveliness, a kind of youthful vitality, a kind of girlish charm." ”

Jiang Wan heard his lover's praise of his poetry, which showed that he had read it with his heart and resonated. Talking about poetry with a like-minded lover is really a very romantic thing, so the tone is more relaxed, "Recently, the inspiration for writing poetry is particularly good, and the artistic conception is also very good, so I have written poems that I have repeatedly recited, repeatedly scrutinized, and repeatedly revised, unlike before, in one go, but pay attention to the perfection of sentences, melodious words, these are also the recent children's basic knowledge of Chinese learning, the great gains made, which is reflected in the poetry is that the words are more broad, and the poems are more structured." ”

Qingfeng persuaded her, "The study time is very tight now, it is better not to write such a long poem, it is too much energy, it is not easy to consider the pattern and ensure the beauty of the language." You can make full use of the scattered time, write more poems like the Great Wall, you can write a paragraph when you have a little time, and then write poems in various time periods, which can be different artistic conceptions and different expressions, and connect them to form a group, I think it can better express your feelings, I like it very much. ”

Jiang Wan is particularly busy during this period of time, so several poems appear in groups, so that you can not only use time flexibly, but also express your feelings from all sides, it is a good genre, after the tempering of the last few poems, more and more skilled, "I have been doing this recently, sometimes on the way to the student's house, sometimes in the gap between learning, and sometimes when I want to express it when I think of you, different artistic conceptions, different environments, different time periods, The poems are really full, and I like this way of expression. ”

Qingfeng remembered her prose, "Actually, I think your prose is more beautiful, your flower world, very beautiful, I have read it many times, I think this kind of prose is particularly powerful, the beauty of flowers is written to the extreme, full of feelings, elegant style, is a rare good prose." In fact, you should write more articles like this, unlike poems, which are not as regular as poems, and can be expressed to your heart's content, so that as the person you write the article, it may be more comfortable to write, and the person who reads the article will have more feelings. Of course, the more beautiful the article is written, the richer the feelings, and the more you need your ability to write, it is really not easy to control such an article, and to become a professional writer, prose is essential. ”

Jiang Wan heard his comment, to be able to make such an evaluation, as a student of the College of Liberal Arts, it should be called a professional evaluation, "During the military training, I read an essay at the party, and recently wrote this essay, mainly depending on the mood and time, the time is more generous, I am also willing to write more prose, the style is more free, the language can also be chic, and often write these essays, the mind is more active." ”

Qingfeng suggested to her, "Judging from your poetry and prose writing, you are a writer with great potential, don't you think of writing some for me?" The power of prose and the writing of poetry are put in the softness, it may be more complete to express a person's emotions, but also to show your writing skills, if you have time, I also hope that you write more, it must be ups and downs, beautiful story, you better be able to try it. ”

Jiang Wan heard his suggestion and felt that it was a very good idea, but writing requires a complete concept, especially a delicate handling of the plot, if it is plain, without some ups and downs, without some fierce contradictions, or a profound ideological realm, it will not look good. But with his current time and work pressure, study pressure, writing is a difficult thing.

If you write a short story, it's actually a little more difficult, because of the length, you can't expand the plot, you can't dig deep into the characters, and you have to explain things clearly in a very short space, it's a little cramped, not to mention that the short story is too simple now, but if you want to write it well, it's not so easy, and it's even more difficult to write it into a well-known story.

If it is written as a novella, the idea must be unfolded, the storyline must be linked one by one, although the character of the character is full, but the storyline needs to be more in-depth, without complete conception, or there is no creative inspiration, the written novella will definitely be like boiled water, so it reads like a running account, there is not much meaning, if you encounter a good theme, and there is creative inspiration, you can also give it a try.

Now I don't have any plans to write a long story, because the pressure of learning is too great now, plus the tutoring of three students, I write hundreds of thousands of words, which requires greater energy, stronger desire to create, and most importantly, more time, these conditions are not available now, not to mention that I don't have this inspiration in my head now, and I often start to write, because the idea is not sufficient, and the general will be miscarried.

Thinking of so much, Jiang Wan said truthfully, "Anyway, I have entered this major, creation is a matter of time and time, inspiration may have to try, start with a simple short and medium-length story, after practicing for a period of time, maybe more life accumulation will give me creative inspiration, once the creative inspiration comes, it will definitely be written, you know those of us who are engaged in writing, inspiration determines the result of creation, without inspiration, it is too painful, with inspiration, you can't stop it." ”

Qingfeng said with deep understanding, "Our Chinese Department of Liberal Arts, itself is to eat the bowl of rice of creation, inspiration is too important to us, you are one of the few people I have seen who has long lasting inspiration, whether it is poetry and prose or, including reportage that can also be dabbled in in the future, inspiration determines whether our works have a lifespan?" I empathize with you on this point, the autobiographical version I wrote by myself when I showed you, roughly my experience, but not reportage, there are many fictional plots in it, more than 200,000 words written down, in fact, I spent a few weeks, because I wrote myself, so it was simpler. ”

Jiang Wan has read his work several times, it should be said that as a beginner, it is already a good work, but in the overall pattern, the choice of subject matter is still insufficient, although in chronological order, the life experience is fully reflected, the lack of contradictions and conflicts is the most fatal flaw of this work. "This kind of autobiographical style is really difficult to write, because there are no contradictions and conflicts in it, so it doesn't look so fascinating, if you add some contradictions and conflicts, increase some of the suspense of the story, especially some plots are handled in detail, it may be more readable than now."

Qingfeng smiled and said, "It seems that you have read it several times, otherwise the questions in it will not let you grasp one by one, writing this kind of autobiography, the biggest problem is the conflict, because I have experienced it all the way, the answer is in my heart, a lot of writing skills, I didn't learn it at the time, so it seems to be a running account, you have time to help me change it, and reprocess those plots, I think it will be a different world, and it will also make readers feel different time and space, different stories and different characters." ”

Jiang Wan hurriedly stopped his words, "These are still left to your own liking, everyone's work has everyone's ideas, if you want to publish this work in the future, I suggest expanding it into a long chapter, several characters in it have not expanded, and the storyline has not been well designed, these need to be completed by yourself, I don't want to see you give up halfway, you should find a time to revise this work, I guess this is the first draft, after your revision, it will be more exciting." ”

Qingfeng smiled bitterly, "I have the same problem as you, I know the problem with this, but I don't have time to modify it, don't you see that I still exist in the USB flash drive?" You may be the first reader of my work, to show you, mainly to let you know about my experience, it can be regarded as confessing everything to you, and when I have time, I will slowly revise it, and finally I will make it a formed work, of course, if time allows. ”

Two people talk to each other about the problem of learning, the problem of the work, and the experience of the two people, the topic is particularly wide, the sea and the sky are everything, but also the two lovers completely open their hearts, this kind of conversation makes people feel very comfortable, not only full of the sweetness of love, the perception of life, but also a like-minded common interest, not a simple chat, but a professional in-depth discussion, this is two in the same field, the same industry, just the first love of people, the simplest, the most common topic.

Just when the two of them were chatting and had entered a good situation, the door of the office was opened by Xu Xiaofu, and the three girlfriends rushed in.

Jiang Feifei preemptively said to Qingfeng, "Senior brother, you are so generous, this flagship store is really a miracle in your hands, we just visited the exhibition hall, which opened our eyes, how did you do it in such a short time?" ”

Qingfeng said modestly, "Where is my credit, it is completely because the two of them have given full play to their abilities, and with all kinds of resources in their hands, they have changed this place in a short period of time, it is the result of Boss Shen Xiaofu's support for them, I just helped him beat the side drum." ”

Xu Gezi still praised in his melodious voice, "Without the strong backing of her senior brother, as a first-year college freshman who has just set foot in the shopping mall, where can she have this ability?" Senior brother, don't be modest, she, Bole, has found you, a thousand-mile horse, it's really a thousand miles in a day. I don't know if I don't see it, and I'm shocked when I see it. ”

Qingfeng said sincerely, "It is not easy to change here, to this extent, it should really be attributed to two high-end management talents, they were originally in Liu Qianqian's company are top players, not only have a solid theoretical foundation, but also have a wealth of practical experience, they have an in-depth understanding of here, using their contacts and their existing resources, and then with the strong support of the boss, fully demonstrated their talent and ability, so there is the current result." ”

Shen Xiaofu couldn't hide his excitement, and asked Qingfeng in surprise, "Senior brother, did you already know about that super big order?" I was taken aback, and according to the funds and supplies we have, you must have put a lot of effort into accomplishing this impossible task. Director Deng told me just now, it's really unimaginable, we can do such a big business now, and we don't have enough funds in our hands, what is going on? ”

Qingfeng replied slowly, "We are studying the next development direction together, Director Deng learned about this super large order from the director of the network platform, the first one is facing the problem of funds, I know that this is not a small amount, and time is urgent, so I asked Liu Qianqian for help, and borrowed 50 million from her, I let it, Zhang Xiaoguang and Lu Mingxiang, borrowed 20 million from our two companies, plus your original funds, and the deposit to be returned after signing this list, It is estimated that the total amount is not less than 100 million, and we have the ability to take this super large order. ”

As soon as Shen Xiaofu heard that Qingfeng had done so much work for him, especially such a large amount of money, if there was no Qingfeng, even this list would not dare to take it in his own hands, the senior brother did not publicize it, but strategized and got these things done at once, and borrowed a huge amount of 70 million yuan from his resources, and it was impossible for others to do it for a while, where is there so much money for you to prepare? Even if you have money, where is there such a ready-made one? He knew in his heart that without Senior Brother Qingfeng wanting to create a business miracle, it was just a fantasy.

She looked at Qingfeng with grateful eyes, this pungent Sichuan girl, her straightforward personality is in full swing again, "Senior Brother Qingfeng, help is helping, General Manager Liu Qianqian and your funds, this time it will take some expenses to say anything, this list is done, not only to pay the corresponding principal and interest to your two companies, but also you have to collect some profit sharing, this can no longer be discussed, no matter the proportion, I accept it, without your help, this list can not be completed." ”

Qingfeng said seriously, "There are rules for lending between enterprises, we just follow the rules, and then make up an agreement to clearly stipulate the responsibilities and rights of both parties." ”

As soon as Jiang Feifei heard their topic, she cut into work again, glanced at Qingfeng, and said mischievously, "We are coming back soon, did we disturb your two-person world?" Originally, we wanted to take another look, but we felt that it was not too early, so we came back to invite you to dinner, which can only disturb the world of the two of you. ”

When Shen Xiaofu heard Jiang Feifei say this, he remembered that there were Jiang Bayi and his friends, so he hurriedly sent someone to invite them to come up, and everyone went to dinner together.