I'm ashamed, it's been a year and a half since I entered the starting point, and I haven't read a book of my peers. I had nothing to do on May Day, and I roughly browsed the paid chapters of "Old Horse", found many problems, and submitted them for revision, so I will inform you today.

The first is the modification of the chapter titles.

The first place

Original content: 51 is unsatisfactory, singing, repenting, affectionate, writing lyrics and sending poems

After revision: 51 (1) Unsatisfactory beating, singing, repentance, affectionate, writing lyrics and poems

The second place

Original content: 51 on the unsatisfactory beating bang singing drama regret affectionate writing lyrics and poems (second place)

Modified: 51 (2) Chi Twilight People Net Thing Kong Ming Fan Hui Heart Female Yao Bu Broken

The third place

Original content: 51 Mid-Autumn Festival brothers and sisters chatting with friends and friends are absent

Revised: 51 (3) For the reunion of Xingbang far away to remember the children of brothers and sisters chatting

Fourth

Original content: 51 Mid-Autumn Festival brothers and sisters recall the bad habits of the two elders at the children's drinking party

After the revision: 51 (4) Mid-Autumn Festival, the two families of the two families will celebrate the bad habits of the two elders

Fifth

Original content: 51 (1) New agriculture Hyosung moved to stay in the city Guiying anxious

Revised: 51 (5) New agriculture touches the warm and sad heart of the heart's birthday

Sixth

Original content: 51 (2) talks about the process, the old man, the slow life, the youth is enlightened

After revision: 51 (6) Recall the traditional food and clothing process of the broad rural society

Seventh

Original content: 51 (3) sleeping on the floor late at night to talk about the changes of the three generations

Revised: 51 (7) Sleeping on the ground paving folk beliefs, remembering the New Year, looking forward to the Spring Festival in the countryside

The eighth place

Original content: 52 factories transferred three people to each other's affairs, and the young man shared his worries

After the revision: 52 in the Great Depression factory transfer father and son three people each other

Ninth place

Original content: 52 middle factory transfer three people to each other and share the worries of the young man (the second place)

After the revision: 52 in the middle of the brother and sister to influence the brother and sister to know the source of the committee of the teenager suddenly grew up

Tenth

Original content: 52 The three women gathered together to mourn the middle-aged and two elders who hurt their flesh and bones alone

After revision: 53 The third daughter complained about the sadness of the middle-aged and the second elder who hurt his flesh and bones alone

Eleventh

Original content: 52 sisters gather sad middle-aged and two elders alone to hurt their flesh and bones (second place)

Modified: 53 years of hope at the end of life and sleepless at night

The Twelfth

Original content: 54 The third party was cramped and the whole family traveled at night, Gui Ying was uneasy

After the revision: 54 in the famine, the old thing, the old horse, the three about the meal, the young man was ashamed

Thirteenth

Original content: 54 middle three gatherings are cramped and the whole family is cramped to travel at night Gui Ying is uneasy (the second place)

After revision: 54 Zhongrenshan, Night and Sea, Love Words, Tu Poems, a family of five has their own thoughts

The fourteenth

Original content: 55 on the seventieth birthday invited friends to sing and recite the year

After revision: 55 upset stories on the road of thousands of miles, 70th birthday, competing for good gifts

Fifteenth

Original content: 55 on the seventieth birthday to invite friends to chant the year (the second place)

After revision: 55 Shangshou Taoshou noodles earthy poems Erhu Qin dialect self-music class

Sixteenth

Original content: 56 (1) worship the sister to collect the mulberry elm and beat the son to refer to things

Modified: 56 absurd life gods and ghosts intersect daughter self-harm Dr. Crush

Seventeenth

Original content: 56 (2) worship the sister to collect the mulberry elm to beat the son to point to the thing (the second place)

Modified: 56 Worship the sisters to receive the mulberry elm to beat the son to refer to things

Eighteenth

Original content: In 57, Bao Xiaotang arrived safely in Shenzhen, and Zhu Hao celebrated his achievements

Modified: 57 in the gang of liars five people celebrate the merit, ruthless, bitter and bitter

Nineteenth

Original content: 59 on (1) pillow cover sorrow from the heart-rending anger divorce

After the revision: 59 on the sole drink to buy drunk Yao Xiang that year a long night of virtual and real pitching

Twentieth place

Original content: 59 on the (2) pillow cover hazy night tour tearing heart and lungs angrily divorced

After the revision: 59 pillows cover grief from which the heart is torn and the lungs are angry and divorced

The second is the modification of the person's name. In the book, Zhong Xuemei's first love Zhang Mingyuan and Dong Huifang's stepson Zhang Mingyuan have heavy pronunciation, so Zhang Mingyuan was changed to Qiu Kaihui.